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Donatus Mercy
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OK OK...out of boredom, I decided to write this story. I'm not a good writer so don't expect too much from me.

I'd really appreciate ur comments. I hereby call on all masters of criticism to come and pummel me with their words

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Donatus Mercy
, Nigeria.
Chapter 1

Eddy: Mom, could we please go to the movies? A new film is gonna be displayed today.

Jane: That would be......
Eddy: I'm done with my home work already. I knew you would place me on a condition. I cleared all obstructions which could only be my assignment. So, I cleared it earlier than expected.

Jane: You see, I wish you were one of those kids that would spend a whole day to finish their assignment.

Eddy: Mom, why would you wish that for me. All other parents wish their kids would finish their homework in no time just the way I do. Mom, at some points, I always wish dad was alive.

Jane: Eddy, don't go there. You know all I want is the best for you. I want you to study hard and be the best scientist in the entire universe, find out about the deadly disease that killed your Dad and a solution so as to save others who have found themselves in the same poo.

Eddy: Mom, I understand but maybe you're not doing it the right way. You shouldn't deprive me of fun. I mean, you're ruining my social life. All I do is study but I find it difficult to consort with people. I always feel obliterated. Now, I wanna repair my already sabotaged life and you're being a villain. I'm gonna be in my room.

Jane: Eddy, Eddy. Okay, I'm fine with it. We're gonna go see the movies.
I never bothered to turn to look at my pitiful mother as I angrily headed for my little abode.

I was a child when my father died. I grew up with my mom. She was my comforter, convincer, councillor, best friend, companion and at some point, the reason a ten year old "me" always wish I had a man to call "my father".

Few minutes after, I heard a slight knock on my door and I could fathom that it was my mom. Yea, I know her style of knocking, it was always a soft knock.

Jane: Eddy, get dressed and let's go to the movies.

At the mention of these words, I felt like a dog with two tails. I felt fulfilled. My heart lipped for joy. I hadn't gone to the movies in years and now, I was gonna sit in that semi-dark room, see a lot of beautiful faces on that big screen over a bowl of delicious pop corn. I was in cloud nine. Could any day ever get better?
We were in mom's car, set to go to Halldew. Everything seemed perfect except for the strange feeling lingering in me. Happiness should be all I feel but a strange sense of dread was overwhelming any feeling of contentment in me as we drove.

Suddenly, there was a huge storm which had strong winds spiralling inward and outward at a very high speed. Everywhere became hot. Yea, it was like the storm blew hot wind. It seemed like a rapidly rotating storm system around a centre of circulation while also flowing radially inwards. Within a short time, it generated high waves, damaged storm surge and tornadoes.

Everyone ran for their dear lives. Some, forgetting their kids out of the raging storm. In no time, the great wind had thrown our car in an helpless position. I struggled to get myself out of the position I was but all to no avail. At that point, I forgot about my mom. I only thought about myself. The wind kept blowing mightily. It blew heavily past my face, causing tiny particles to enter my eyes as I struggled to get it out of my eyes. My attempt to remove the unseen object made matter worse. My sight became snuffed out. All I saw was darkness. I was blind.

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Mathew Oluwaseun
University of Ilorin (Unilorin)
Mechanical Engineering
500Level, Nigeria.
Waiting For Next Chapter

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Donatus Mercy
, Nigeria.
Chapter 2


I scavaged the floor with my hand, searching for my mom.

Jane: Eddy...

I heard her weak voice call for my name.

Eddy: Mom, I'm sorry, I'm sorry I got us into this mess. If I had known, we would have stayed back at home safe.

Jane: Eddy, I'm sorry I couldn't give you the life that you deserve. I'm sorry I wasn't a mother you wanted. I was always busy with work. I never had a chance to have fun with you. I believe destiny wants it this way. You have a bright future sweetheart. Explore your talent. Be the greatest scientist you've always wanted to be. Live the kind of life you've always wanted to live. I love you baby. I love you so much. I love y.......

Eddy: Mom, mom. I love you too mom. Mom. mom.....Noooooo

I heard myself scream till i felt like the whole world was gonna come down on me. I passed out.


Lady: The boy is alive sir

Man: Any complications?

Lady: There are lots of complications, especially with his brain. He has retinal detachment and intracranial hemorrhage. He's currently unconscious and we have to carry out an emergency operation on him. Sir, the kid doesn't seem normal.

Man: How do you mean?

Lady: His body cells doesn't conot that of a human. With time, we'll find out more.

Man: Okay Doc, you've done a great job. Thank you.

I heard a conversation between two unfamiliar voices as I struggled to stand up from the bed I was made to lie on. There was nobody in the room. I kept on hearing the voices loud and clear like they were by my side.

I struggled to get out of bed but I had hardly taken a few steps when I stumbled against a few things and fell as the unknown objects made an unpleasant noise as it met with the floor.

I heard footsteps as they sounded nearer but they didn't come as quickly as I expected. It seemed like they were coming from a distant place. The thought of how I heard that far ravaged my mind as I was pulled up by an unknown hand.

Lady: Oh my God, how did you get up, when did you get up. You shouldn't be awake. You should still be unconscious.

Her accent made me wonder where I was. She had a kind of Carribean-American accent.

Eddy: Who are you?

Her name was Linda, a doctor. She told me about how I was the only survivor at the scene of the incident. That was when I remembered my mother.

Eddy: What about my mother.

I asked in a rather harsh tone

Linda: I already told you that you were the only survivor. Every other person died.

Immediately, I grabbed my head as a painful headache took over my head, a feeling of wanting to upchuck followed as i felt like I was gonna pass out any moment soon. This time, pass out and never wake up.

Linda: You've got to relax, remember I told you you have a bleeding brain. You need to relax. If you don't, it could result to insanity. Rest your head please.

Eddy: No, I can't relax, I feel like my head is gonna explode.

Linda: Okay.

The next moment, I started feeling drowsy as I felt a sharp thing passed into my fragile skin. I heard Linda say "this is gonna help you for a while" before I slept off.

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Donatus Mercy
, Nigeria.
Hey guys, I'm gonna post the next chapter later in the day or tomorrow. I haven't written anything on chapter 3. I promise to make it up to u guys. Thanks for viewing

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Mathew Oluwaseun
University of Ilorin (Unilorin)
Mechanical Engineering
500Level, Nigeria.

[ @donnybee: ] Hey guys, I'm gonna post the next chapter later in the day or tomorrow. I haven't written anything on chapter 3. I promise to make it up to u guys. Thanks for viewing

Sipping Tea
Blind: Ok Ok...out Of Boredom, I Decided To Write This Story.  - Books/Literature/Writing

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Adelani Temiloluwa
School Of Nursing Ondo
Nursing Student
300Level, Nigeria.
Me waiting for the Next chapter
Blind: Ok Ok...out Of Boredom, I Decided To Write This Story.  - Books/Literature/Writing

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Precious Okoro
Uniben
Law
100Level, Nigeria.
seriously waiting for the next chapter

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Adelani Temiloluwa
School Of Nursing Ondo
Nursing Student
300Level, Nigeria.
@Expmercy We are all waiting for you

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Donatus Mercy
, Nigeria.
Temitayo findschoolnews

I'll update soon sir

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Adelani Temiloluwa
School Of Nursing Ondo
Nursing Student
300Level, Nigeria.

[ @expmercy: ] Temitayo findschoolnews

I'll update soon sir

ok mum

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